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Post by xx. Fallen .xx on Sept 14, 2009 17:37:16 GMT -5
Name: Swallowsong
Age: 22 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: LightningClan
Rank: Deputy
One line appearance: Swallowsong is a small grey she-cat with startling sky-blue eyes.
Physical Description: Swallowsong is extremely small for a she-cat, about the size of a medium-large apprentice. Her fur is light grey, save one of her paws, her tail-tip, and a stripe down her nose. The most noticeable of her physical features are her eyes, a stunning clear blue that fade into a dark navy color at the center, around the pupils. The fur on her left hind leg are is parted, revealing a delicately thin, white scar about a claw-length long. Swallowsong has long whiskers and a feathery tail.
Personality: Swallowsong is kind. She is so many other things, occasionally strict, very quiet, truthful, sharp-tongued, fast-footed, and a little too daring for her own good, as well. But her kindness is what stands out most, to those who know her, perhaps even characterizes her. Swallowsong always puts other's needs before hers, not needing any rewards or even anyone to know who went out of their way to help. She's gotten into serious trouble for helping other clans before during tough times, too. One of her drawbacks is her stubbornness - once she sets her mind on something, little will affect her decision. This combined with her fear-nothing trait sometimes doesn't turn out too well, and she needs someone to keep her in check. Swallowsong loves kits, and oddly enough, water. She doesn't mind getting her semi-long fur wet, whether it be in snow or in water. She likes solitude, and frequently goes on walks by herself.
History: Swallowkit - Swallowkit was born to Icegaze and Lightningstrike, ordinary warriors of LightningClan. Swallowkit had no brothers, but one stillborn sister whom she doesn't remember at all, named Silentkit and buried the day of her birth. Swallowkit opened her eyes extremely late, causing plenty of worry for her mother and father, as well as LightningClan's medicine cat. When she finally did, she was already three and a half weeks of age. Swallowkit's favorite activity when she was young was to listen to elders' tell their stories, and memorized almost every legend they said.
Swallowpaw - Swallowpaw was apprenticed at the usual six moons of age, to a new warrior named Cherryfall. She disliked her mentor at first, who constantly taught extremely boring subjects such as marking territories, digging up moss, etc., while her former playmates learned hunting and stalking techniques, and practiced battle moves. Her views changed abruptly, however, when Cherryfall indulged in clan 'politics', which Swallowpaw loved. She was interested in the history of the clans, of the huge mistakes leaders had made, how things could've been done better, and battle stratigizing.
Swallowsong - Swallowsong got her warrior name, feeling she had earned it well. She was a quick thinker, defeating her opponents not based on pure strength but on her speed, agility, and mind. She was a stealthy hunter, and excelled in almost everything Cherryfall taught her. During the first few moons of her warrior-hood, Swallowsong got into enormous trouble. Leafbare had arrived, and OceanClan was starving when the river in their territory froze over and every cat who swam in the ocean to catch fish caught a horrible greencough and died from the water's temperature. Swallowsong brought prey to the enemy clan, depositing it in a tree-hole on the border every morning for their morning patrol to find. Another warrior caught her, and she was subjected to camp-confinement for three moons.
Swallowsong, Deputy When Phoenixstar earned her leader's name, she chose Swallowsong as her deputy, much to the grey and white she-cat's surprise. At first, she messed up on everything, but soon Swallowsong got the hang of it.
Goal: To do the best she can for LightningClan.
Role Play Example: Rain drizzled down from the darkening sky, pattering loudly as it hit the broad green leaves in it's path. In the distance, a clap of thunder sounded, probably preceded by an unseen flash of lightning. Swallowsong shivered, her pelt standing up against the cold and the mouse clutched tightly between her jaws already loosing it's warmth. Looking about her warily, the grey-and-white she-cat headed for camp at a brisk pace. It wasn't the rain so much that bothered her - Swallowsong didn't really mind it at all - but the cold combined with the dreary dark grey that surrounded the deputy made her shudder in her own territory. A louder boom of thunder made Swallowsong jump, pelt bristling, and the precipitation doubled, beginning to pour from the colorless sky. Shadows danced in the corners of the she-cat's gaze, making her whip around her head in alarm. Just trees, just shadows. she told herself, beginning to run. Swallowsong was bothered even more by the pure idea that she was bothered, it wasn't like her to be scared of a mere thunderstorm. Why was this one different? Grey and white fur plastered to her small body, the LightningClan deputy tried out outrun her thoughts. Another tendril of darkness reached out to her, and Swallowsong jerked her sapphire-colored gaze towards it. Skidding to a halt, she felt her lungs heave as they sucked in a sharp intake of breath. Her now cold mouse thudded dully to the meadow floor as glistening fangs were bared.
Picture: Swallowsong
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Post by Phoenix on Sept 14, 2009 18:11:36 GMT -5
I'd be glad to have you as my deputy.  And yeah it's ok to have 2 high ranking positions. But that's the most your allowed. And also unless it's part of a plot you aren't allowed two of the same position, for example two leaders. But because this is a one account per person site people's characters are going to be killed off, including high ranking ones. So if Phoenixstar lost all her lives in battle and Swallowing was still deputy she would become Swallowstar, even if you were still leader of Oceanclan. Does that make sense?[/color] Just one thing, I know in the bio form it says only one rp example has to be done but you have to do one for all high ranking position cats. Just so I know you can rp them. I know you'll be able to rp her fine, it's just a rule that Rawr and I agreed on and follow. Sorry for the inconvenience. If you could just put that in quickly I can accept the bio. Then I can welcome a deputy to my clan. [/color]
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Post by xx. Fallen .xx on Sept 16, 2009 14:28:50 GMT -5
Okay!  Yeah, and don't ask me what exactly is happening in my RP sample. It's kinda abstract. And creepy.
Thanks!
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Post by ~Rawr~ on Sept 16, 2009 14:44:05 GMT -5
She's pretty!
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Post by Phoenix on Sept 16, 2009 14:47:30 GMT -5
That's great! Accepted![/color]
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And yeah it's ok to have 2 high ranking positions. But that's the most your allowed. And also unless it's part of a plot you aren't allowed two of the same position, for example two leaders. But because this is a one account per person site people's characters are going to be killed off, including high ranking ones. So if Phoenixstar lost all her lives in battle and Swallowing was still deputy she would become Swallowstar, even if you were still leader of Oceanclan. Does that make sense?[/color]
Yeah, and don't ask me what exactly is happening in my RP sample. It's kinda abstract. And creepy.
